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May 12, 2013
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark III
Shutter Speed
1/8000 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
135 mm
ISO Speed
250
Date Taken
Apr 20, 2013, 12:38:04 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Sensor Size
31mm
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First off, let me congratulate you on a job incredibly well done. This piece is absolutely gorgeous from the detail and work with the photo down to the border.

Your composition is nice, and I like that her gaze is directed away from the viewers eyes, this doesn't create a disconnect at all, instead it pulls me into the image.

The shallowness of the image and the use of black and white go hand in hand for a beautiful foreground and background that gives a little negative space, but at the same time keeping the detail there for us to see.

I would love to have seen you either zoom in just ever so slightly more or alternatively zoom out. You cut off just the tips of her hair, and it would have been amazing to have had every last part inside the image frame.

Really a fantastic job, congratulations!
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This photograph is simply beautifully dreamy. It is a moment to hold on and listen to yourself for a moment. I dont know how the grey gradient from the bottom comes up, but you managed a nice effect. Just, because it makes it dreamy. The right shoulder seems to merge with the background. That way it could show a ghost, or a dream about a beloved person.
Another technique aspect is the blurry background. I think this aspect correlate with the impact and vision aspects. The impact also comes from the closed eyes. Apart from that: I think the vision is about content, substance and meaning. Substance can come from compound of technique and impact. So vision can emerge from the both of them. And here it is evident: The blurry background makes the person special, with a certain focus on her. Also the dream theme comes clear, to me - since, in dreams a blurry view is common.
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volkanay Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
this is perfect!!! (your like all photos)but  I want this big print, so do you wanna please send  big size ? its my mail if you ok :     volkanaymail@gmail.com              thank you:happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: :happybounce: 
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Rinksy Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
your beautiful work has been featured here :heart:
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alexandruana Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
*_*
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PASSiON--PHOTO Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Photographer
such a beautiful moment! love her expression - and her freckles!!!
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ClaireQuinot Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
whaou! :o
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Chocolatecookiecrumb Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful <3
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vertus-design-being Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Incredible.
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la-Structure-du-Ciel Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist
Hi! I used your beautiful photo for a study here :[link]:

If you want me to delete this work, just tell me, I will understand and put it off.

Thanks! =)
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Othail Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutly amazing ! Could I use it such as a ref for please ? I'll show you the result (;
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