This is an excellent portrait in which the combination of effects gel to great effect. The choice of sepia toning creates a retrospective context which the girls' melancholy expression amplifies most effectively; the blurred background adds to the overall dismal aura and has so little visual information it allows us to concentrate on the subject, thus elegantly achieving its objective. I feel the balance here is just about spot on The cropping works well too, had the artist chosen a (typical) square crop the effect would have been greatly diminished: and the off- centre position shows why the 'rule of thirds' works so well. Although I think the cropping does work on this image I do not like to see the top of the head clipped, a personal foible I know, but I feel the complete head with less chest would have worked better. Overall this is an emotive image, well crafted superbly balanced.
The choice of sepia toning creates a retrospective context which the girls' melancholy expression amplifies most effectively; the blurred background adds to the overall dismal aura and has so little visual information it allows us to concentrate on the subject, thus elegantly achieving its objective. I feel the balance here is just about spot on
The cropping works well too, had the artist chosen a (typical) square crop the effect would have been greatly diminished: and the off- centre position shows why the 'rule of thirds' works so well. Although I think the cropping does work on this image I do not like to see the top of the head clipped, a personal foible I know, but I feel the complete head with less chest would have worked better.
Overall this is an emotive image, well crafted superbly balanced.
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
Please sign up or login to post a critique.