My first thought and feeling is - this is disturbing. . . and that is a powerful provocation of emotion, which is why I have to give 4 stars on impact. . . It is very clear that this is probably what the photographer wants to communicate and so I give 5 stars on vision also. . .
I give 3 stars on originality - after the initial shock value wears off, the viewer moves on, which also takes away from impact.
Basic composition elements are all good - blurry where one would expect it, clear where it should and great timing on the lighting. Great use of colour on the model - bright red dress that contrasts nicely with the drab scenery . . . 5 on technique.
If I were to make some recommendations - I would recommend some additional elements to keep the interest of the viewer and to add some sense of mystery to the work. A blurry human object running away, some debris around her like broken glass or wood. . . or some objects that are ordinary, but out of place. . .
Amazingly done, I lov eht ecomposition as well as the colour scheme, it feels as if you are beíng dragged into the photo if you look at it for a long time, totally fascinating!!!
I give 3 stars on originality - after the initial shock value wears off, the viewer moves on, which also takes away from impact.
Basic composition elements are all good - blurry where one would expect it, clear where it should and great timing on the lighting. Great use of colour on the model - bright red dress that contrasts nicely with the drab scenery . . . 5 on technique.
If I were to make some recommendations - I would recommend some additional elements to keep the interest of the viewer and to add some sense of mystery to the work. A blurry human object running away, some debris around her like broken glass or wood. . . or some objects that are ordinary, but out of place. . .
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