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November 2, 2013
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark III
Shutter Speed
1/4000 second
Aperture
F/1.4
Focal Length
35 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Nov 2, 2013, 2:08:39 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
Sensor Size
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dark moon by MartaSyrko dark moon by MartaSyrko
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I'm sorry, this is my first critique so be prepared for some fumbling.

Analysis
I would like to say that to me this photograph is really beautiful. (okay, I think I'm doing okay so far ^ ^)
And where her blue eyes could've been washed out in a face as pale as it is, the fact that she is surrounded by black (i.e. her hair, the mask, the top), they instead stand out. And although I wouldn't say there was much expression in her face, except from maybe earnestness- her eyes (as I've talked about before) definitely create an impact. *Her clothes are very delicate and intricate, which contrasts against her simple yet bold makeup.
I can't say much about the technique (as I don't know much about photography), but I noticed that her face (especially the area around her eyes) is sharper than the rest of the photo, apparently to emphasis her expression? I don't know, sorry. Anyway, this technique definitely contributed to the impact of the photo.

But all in all, I really like this. And I don't what to tell you to improve, because a photograph is a moment frozen in time, and that moment's passed... plus every photograph is different.

Good job :) (sorry if this critique is inadequate)
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BeanieInTheRye Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, her EYES!~
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ibelieveinmom Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Student Interface Designer
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CarolineDelane Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
Wow, awsome <3
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Mishkina Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
crazy)))))))))))))))))
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printsILike Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Absolutely stunning :love:
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fogke Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Student Artist
I featured this great photo in my next journal inspiration on my wall :) fogke.deviantart.com/journal/I… ;)
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Zelman66 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013
Very nice
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Alehodr Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
wow those eyes are beautiful!
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stephben Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
awsome :)
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